RE: [dita] Web portals for reviewing Robert's content model changes

I finished S yesterday and T today. I saw a handful of fixed things along the lines of ones I have been reporting to Robert, but nothing that looks like it needs any more fixing.

 

I think that officially wraps up this fragment review.

 

*Whew*.

 

mag

 

 

From: Debra Bissantz [mailto:] 
Sent: Friday, July 15, 2016 9:20 AM
To: Debra Bissantz; Robert D Anderson
Cc: Kristen James Eberlein; ; Tom Magliery; Eliot Kimber; Maria Essig
Subject: RE: [dita] Web portals for reviewing Robert's content model changes

 

Maria and I finished the last few letters. Everything looks much better. 

 

- Deb

 

From:  [mailto:] On Behalf Of Debra Bissantz
Sent: Thursday, July 14, 2016 4:09 PM
To: Robert D Anderson <>
Cc: Kristen James Eberlein <>; ; Tom Magliery <>; Eliot Kimber <>; Maria Essig <>
Subject: RE: [dita] Web portals for reviewing Robert's content model changes

 

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Finished with R. Let me know if you need help with S and T. I have time tomorrow morning.

 

- Deb

 

From: Debra Bissantz 
Sent: Thursday, July 14, 2016 4:05 PM
To: Robert D Anderson <>
Cc: Kristen James Eberlein <>; ; Tom Magliery <>; Eliot Kimber <>; Debra Bissantz <>; Maria Essig <>
Subject: RE: [dita] Web portals for reviewing Robert's content model changes

 

I found another ??+ in <reqpers>.

 

- Deb

 

From:  [mailto:] On Behalf Of Robert D Anderson
Sent: Thursday, July 14, 2016 10:07 AM
To: Debra Bissantz <>
Cc: Kristen James Eberlein <>; ; Tom Magliery <>; Eliot Kimber <>
Subject: RE: [dita] Web portals for reviewing Robert's content model changes

 

I've completed the review of the base version, and didn't find any issues. [Ah, the perks of claiming the base edition.]

Tom found a fairly minor issue in his review that should be addressed - I'm searching to see if that same error shows up elsewhere. Specifically, with some odd models like the <completed> model in bookmap, the spec ended up with two question marks together; searching on similar constructions, I've found another spot that ends with a question mark followed by an asterisk. (That one accurately reflects the grammar file, but looks confusing, so I'll clean it up.)

Regards,

Robert D. Anderson 
DITA-OT lead and Co-editor DITA 1.3 specification,
Digital Services Group 

E-mail: 
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11501 BURNET RD,, TX, 78758-3400, AUSTIN, USA 

Debra Bissantz ---07/14/2016 10:16:17 AM---All, Are you checking everything for all elements? I know that originally, we were splitting this up

From: Debra Bissantz <>
To: Kristen James Eberlein <>, "" <>, Tom Magliery <>, Eliot Kimber <>
Date: 07/14/2016 10:16 AM
Subject: RE: [dita] Web portals for reviewing Robert's content model changes
Sent by: <>

All,
Are you checking everything for all elements? I know that originally, we were splitting this up by all-inclusive, tech comm, and base. Would it make more sense to just look at everything for all elements for a specific letter group?

- Deb

-----Original Message-----
From:  [mailto:] On Behalf Of Kristen James Eberlein
Sent: Wednesday, July 13, 2016 7:21 PM
To: 
Subject: Re: [dita] Web portals for reviewing Robert's content model changes

Tom, I just scanned through U,V,W,X, and Y; things look as they should.

I think we probably added <draft-comment> and <required-cleanup> to more places than was optimal --Why would one ever need <draft-comment> within <xmlatt>? -- but it's too late to do anything about that.

Best,
Kris

Kristen James Eberlein
Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee
Principal consultant, Eberlein Consulting www.eberleinconsulting.com
+1 919 682-2290; kriseberlein (skype)

On 7/13/2016 8:02 PM, Tom Magliery wrote:
> I've scanned through the content models of the A and B elements in this updated version. There were a significant number of content models that had noticeable changes from the release, and everything looks right enough in the updated version.
>
> There is no way I can complete scanning C through Y by Friday. If a scan of all of them is necessary, I will need more help.
>
> mag
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From:  [mailto:] On 
> Behalf Of Chris Nitchie
> Sent: Tuesday, July 12, 2016 9:18 AM
> To: 
> Subject: [dita] Web portals for reviewing Robert's content model 
> changes
>
> I’ve posted both the as-published DITA 1.3 spec and the version with Robert’s content model updates for easy comparison. The as-released version is here:
>
> https://td-demo.titaniasoftware.com/portals/ui/dita13-allinclusive-asr
> eleased/
>
> And the version with the updates is here:
>
> https://td-demo.titaniasoftware.com/portals/ui/dita13-allinclusive-upd
> ated/
>
> Two tags for which the updates are really obvious are <chapter> and <section>.
>
> <chapter> as released:
>
> https://td-demo.titaniasoftware.com/portals/ui/dita13-allinclusive-asr
> eleased/viewer/560a8d05e4b0df3b1813d80e/560a8d24e4b0df3b1813e180/r/cml
> tc#chapter3
>
> <chapter> with updates:
>
> https://td-demo.titaniasoftware.com/portals/ui/dita13-allinclusive-upd
> ated/viewer/57850a594cedfd0001fe712a/57850a6b4cedfd0001fe750a/r/cmltc#
> chapter3
>
> <section> as released:
>
> https://td-demo.titaniasoftware.com/portals/ui/dita13-allinclusive-asr
> eleased/viewer/560a8d05e4b0df3b1813d80e/560a8d24e4b0df3b1813e180/r/cml
> ts#section10
>
> <section> with updates:
>
> https://td-demo.titaniasoftware.com/portals/ui/dita13-allinclusive-upd
> ated/viewer/57850a594cedfd0001fe712a/57850a6b4cedfd0001fe750a/r/cmlts#
> section10
>
> Happy reviewing!
>
> Chris
>

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