Re: [dita] Stage 3 proposal: split syntax diagrams from programming domain

Robert did not use the TC PDF style sheets to generate the PDF of
      the proposal.

    

    
Best,

      Kris

      

      Kristen James Eberlein

      Chair, OASIS DITA Technical Committee

      OASIS Distinguished Contributor

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On 9/1/2020 3:11 AM, Gershon Joseph
      wrote:

    

    
      
      
      
      
      

        
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            Robert,

        
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            have reviewed the PDF and I have no comments. Looks good to
            me.

        
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You
            may wish to fix the PDF stylesheet to remove âOracle Cloud Infrastructureâ from the footers. It
            should probably say âOASIS Openâ or whatever weâre supposed
            to use nowadays.

        
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Since
            Iâll be late to the TC meeting, Iâm sending my feedback by
            email.

        
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Gershon

        
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From: <> on
              behalf of Robert Anderson
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              Date: Tuesday, 1 September 2020 at 0:21

              To: ""
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              Subject: [dita] Stage 3 proposal: split syntax
              diagrams from programming domain

        

        

          
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Iâm
            attaching the Stage 3 proposal for issue 361 to split syntax
            diagrams (and now syntax phrases) from the programming
            domain.

        
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Thanks to
            Deb and Frank for reviews. Frank noted one thing, which is
            that the domain token (syntaxdiagram-d) is more verbose than
            many of the original ones (such as âpr-dâ that it used to
            have). I tend to link the more verbose ones better in this
            case, and it follows the pattern of more recent domain
            tokens, such as âditavalref-dâ. We should discuss whether
            others prefer a more abbreviated token in this case.

        
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Thanks,

        
Robert

        
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