RE: [ebcore] Re: Required changes to submitted specification PartyIdType-1.0-cd02

Thank you Pim!

 

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From: Pim van der Eijk 
[mailto:] 
Sent: Thursday, April 08, 2010 10:40 
AM
To: 
Subject: RE: [ebcore] Re: 
Required changes to submitted specification 
PartyIdType-1.0-cd02

 

All,

 

I will produce an update sometime in the next few 
days.  Since this is just editorial I will send the updates to Kim and you 
all at the same time.

 

Pim

From: Kim Goolsby 
[mailto:] 
Sent: 06 April 2010 
17:31
To: 
Cc: Mary 
McRae
Subject: [ebcore] Re: Required changes to submitted 
specification PartyIdType-1.0-cd02

Lastly, 
#9. The spec must always have a version number (OASIS ebCore Party Id 
Type Technical Specification Version 1.0).

On Tue, Apr 6, 2010 at 11:26 AM, Kim Goolsby <> 
wrote:

  
Please find below a list of required changes to the 
  submitted spec, PartyIdType-1.0-cd02. To help you with the URI section, the 
  following links provide useful information: 
  

  
    
The OpenOffice specification template
http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/OASISSpecificationTemplateV3.2.ott 

    
The URI Generator
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php 

    
The URI Tutorial Movie
http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/videos/URIs.mov

  

  
This document needs to be changed as follows:

  

  
    
Specification 
    URIs (in general):
These must point to locations at docs.oasis-open.org as shown in the specification 
    template (http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/OASISSpecificationTemplateV3.2.ott). 
    If you're having difficulties constructing the proper pathing, feel free to 
    take advantage of the URI generator (http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/uri-block-generator.php).

Note that all 
    three formats must be provided/noted: editable source (odt in this case), 
    html and pdf.

    
Previous 
    Version:
Since this is the first time this document is being uploaded 
    to docs.oasis-open.org, it should say 
    'N/A'.

    
There 
    is no such heading as 'Previous Approved Version'; please refer to the 
    specification template and the URI generator for proper metadata labels 
    and URIs.

    
Technical 
    Committee:
Please hypertext link the name of the TC to the public 
    homepage as done in the specification template.

    
Related 
    Work: 
Please add hypertext links to the OASIS references (and, if 
    possible, non-OASIS references).

    
Footer: 
Please 
    remove the file extension (.odt) from the filename and remove the brackets 
    from around the date.

    
Notices: 
Please 
    remove the text within the square brackets and replace with any specific 
    names, abbreviations, etc. as appropriate.

    
References: 
The 
    Oasis references are not in the correct citation format. Please change 
    to the citation format shown in the specification template. 

For 
    example:
[EDXL-HAVE] OASIS 
    Standard, “Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL) Hospital AVailability 
    Exchange (HAVE) Version 1.0”, November 2008.
http://docs.oasis-open.org/emergency/edxl-have/os/emergency_edxl_have-1.0-spec-os.doc

    
Acknowledgements: 
    The Acknowledgements section is required.

  

  

  
Please let me know if you have any questions.

  

  
Thanks,

  
Kim

  

-- 
Kim Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS: 
  Advancing open standards for the information society
email:  
web: www.oasis-open.org
phone: 
1.734.223.6890

-- 
Kim 
Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the 
information society
email:  
web: 
www.oasis-open.org
phone: 
1.734.223.6890