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Re: [ebxml-msg] Groups - ebms-v3.0-part2-wd70(pdf) (ebms-v3.0-part2-wd70.pdf) uploaded

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Theo Kramer <>
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2011-02-13T05:27:37+00:00
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Re: [ebxml-msg] Groups - ebms-v3.0-part2-wd70(pdf) (ebms-v3.0-part2-wd70.pdf) uploaded
On further reading of section 7 I notice that typos, eg. '... m P-Mode parameters..' have crept in and areas where the use of language can be improved. 

I am happy to 'fix' those by Wednesday if ok with the rest. If ok let me know if I should edit wd69 or wait for wd70.
 
On 12 Feb 2011, at 10:44 AM, Theo Kramer wrote:

> Thanks for this
> 
> Can I suggest one small grammatical change to the first para of '7 Conformance' 
> 
> Replace 
> 
> 'This conformance section is defining four conformance profiles that...'
> 
> with
> 
> 'This section defines four conformance profiles that...'

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Theo
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