RW Edits-Comments on Intro to CF 3.0.doc

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Subject: RW Edits-Comments on Intro to CF 3.0.doc




From: "Winters, Roger" <>
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Date: Thu, 3 Nov 2005 08:58:23 -0800 









Dear 
Friends,
 
I've begun 
work as Editor for ECF 3.0 and will continue to review textual material in the 
specification over the next few days (before going onto vacation status 
11/7-11/16), suggesting changes that I hope will provide clearer descriptions 
and explanations for those who will be our readers.
 
While 
working with the initial section on Scope, I realized that my recommended 
changes are numerous and might seem to some to imply that the ECF TC should 
revisit issues or change decisions already made. That is not my 
intention. I share the edits I recommend for this important opening section 
during the comment period so that, if anyone feels any given edit or 
rephrasing undoes an important decision, erroneously describes something about 
the specification, or otherwise causes a problem, the edited language for that 
part could be rolled back. Where I have succeeded in conveying the content in a 
more concise, polished, precise, or otherwise improved way, I hope the edits 
will be acceptable.
 
I will be 
available (off and on) between now and Monday in case someone would like to 
inquire about the reasoning behind a given editorial change. For those that are 
not simply a matter of grammatical obedience or personal taste, I will do my 
best to explain. 
 
Again, it 
is not my intent to revisit issues already resolved. I am eager to see the 
specification move forward on schedule.
 
Regards,
 
Roger
 
Roger 
Winters

(206) 
296-7838
 
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