Comments on draft consensus report

I have a number of comments, in the attached file.  I propose replacing two paragraphs, which are change tracked.  A few minor typos are also change tracked.   Everything else is in comments (annotations).

Please feel free to discuss, comment or ask me to clarify anything.

John
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 [mailto:]  On Behalf Of  Robin LaFontaine
Sent:  Tuesday, October 11, 2011 8:47 AM
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Subject:  [office-collab] Timetable for next steps

Following the conference call today, we shall aim at the following schedule:
2011-10-15 all comments on draft consensus report to Robin  2011-10-22 Second draft of report  2011-11-01 Conference call to discuss (difficult timing as European clocks changed but not US clocks, so maybe an hour earlier in Europe)
Robin
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