2.3.1 Text Documents

Greetings,

The last two sentences of the first paragraph read:

Additionally, a text document may contain forms, change tracking 
information and variable declarations. Each of these are contained in a 
container element in the document prelude, and may be referenced from 
the document content.

Comment: The multiple uses of 'contain' and 'container' is confusing.

Suggest:

Additionally, a text document may contain forms, change tracking 
information and variable declarations. Each of these is defined in the 
document prelude, and may be referenced from the document content.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick

-- 
Patrick Durusau
Director of Research and Development
Society of Biblical Literature

Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface
Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model

Topic Maps: Human, not artificial, intelligence at work!