4.3 Lists

Greetings,

The first paragraph, second setence of 4.3 Lists reads:

A list is a paragraph-level element, which contains a sequence of list 
items, optionally preceded by a special list item called the list header.

Comment:

Seems ambiguous as to whether the list header applies to the list or to 
the sequence of list items.

Suggest:

A list is a paragraph-level element, which contains a sequence of list 
items, and it is optionally preceded by a special list item called the 
list header.

Comment: In recasting, number agreement calls attention back to the list.

Hope everyone is having a great day!

Patrick


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Patrick Durusau
Director of Research and Development
Society of Biblical Literature

Chair, V1 - Text Processing: Office and Publishing Systems Interface
Co-Editor, ISO 13250, Topic Maps -- Reference Model

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