Review of ODF 1.2 specification draft 1.2 - chapter 11 - database

Patrick, all,

my colleague Ocke Janssen has review the database chapter of the most 
recent ODF 1.2. His comments are attached.

Best regards

Michael

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Subject: ODF Spec Review für db
Date: Mon, 13 Oct 2008 09:25:14 +0200
From: Ocke Janssen <>
Organization: Sun Microsystems GmbH
To: Michael Brauer <>

The attachment contains the extract document for the database part
(chapter 11 and the attributes chapter only with db relevant ones). All
changes are yellow and my comments begin with the prefix "OJ:".

Best regards,

Ocke

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