[OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (OFFICE-2837) 15.4.4 <anim:iterate>wording is deeply confused - see description

15.4.4 <anim:iterate> wording is deeply confused - see description
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                 Key: OFFICE-2837
                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OFFICE-2837
             Project: OASIS Open Document Format for Office Applications (OpenDocument) TC
          Issue Type: Bug
    Affects Versions: ODF 1.2 Part 1 CD 5
            Reporter: Patrick Durusau
             Fix For: ODF 1.2 Part 1 CD 5


Reads in part: "The difference to a <anim:par> element is that the <anim:iterate> element does not specify effects for its target element itself. It iterates over child elements of the target element and executes all its child effects with the children of the target element as target."

1) Not necessary to mention <anim:par>

2) Not necessary to say what the target is not

3) Simply state the definition

Suggest:

"The difference to a <anim:par> element is that the <anim:iterate> element does not specify effects for its target element itself. It iterates over child elements of the target element and executes all its child effects with the children of the target element as target."



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