reposting Yoshida-san's comments on CS02

Reposting Yoshida-sanâs comment of https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/oslc-promcode/202112/msg00008.html  which has some corrupted characters.

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Document reviewed: OSLC PROMCODE Version 1.0. Part 1: Specification https://docs.oasis-open.org/oslc-promcode/promcode/v1.0/cs02/promcode-spec.html1. Introduction1.2 Goal and Solution             [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]3. TerminologyProject             [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]Project Management             [PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]4. PROMCODE Domain Model Specification4.1 Domain Model4.1.1 ScopeItem             finer grained ScopeItem entities -> finer-grained ScopeItem entities             a coarse grained ScopeItemãentity -> a coarse-grained ScopeItem entity             a set of finer grained ScopeItem entities -> a set of finer-grained ScopeItem entities4.1.2 WorkItem             a finer grained activity -> a finer-grained activityA coarse grained WorkItem entity -> A coarse-grained WorkItem entityfiner grained WorkItem entities -> finer-grained WorkItem entitiesa set of fine grained WorkItem entities -> a set of fine-grained WorkItem entities4.1.3 Artifact             finer grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact entitiesA coarse grained Artifact entity -> A coarse-grained Artifact entityfiner grained Artifact entities -> finer-grained Artifact entities4.1.6 ManagedItemAttributessource: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1]   (put a blank character after String)4.1.8 ReportLinkscorrespondsTo: Plan [0 .. 1]             the Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity -> a Report entity is created to link to the new Plan entity4.1.11 ManagedItemCollectionAttributessource: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1]   (put a blank character after String)4.1.14 ProjectAttributessource: String[0 .. 1] -> source: String [0 .. 1]   (put a blank character after String)LinksunitOfScopeItemSize: Unit[0 .. 1] -> unitOfScopeItemSize: Unit [0 .. 1]   (put a blank character after Unit)4.2.2 Applying Quality ManagementTable 2 Example of Quality Management TableLine of Code -> Lines of CodeArtifact, and Measure -> Artifact, Measure, and MeasurementAppendix C. ReferencesC.2 Informative references[PMBOK5] -> [PMBOK]<a href=""http://www.pmi.org" class="">http://www.pmi.org/"> -> <a href=""https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok" class="">https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/">A Guide to Project Management Body of Knowledge, 5th ed. -> A Guide to the Project Management Body of Knowledge<a href=""http://www.pmi.org" class="">http://www.pmi.org/"> -> <a href=""https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok" class="">https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/">http://www.pmi.org/  -> https://www.pmi.org/pmbok-guide-standards/foundational/pmbok/