Re: [sca-assembly] Required changes to sca-assembly-1.1-test-assertions-cd02.odt, TCADMIN-168

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Kim,

Here is an updated ZIP containing the
fixes you requested below:

I've made some comments below 

Yours,  Mike.

Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.

Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.

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From:
Kim Goolsby <>

To:


Cc:
Mary McRae <>

Date:
21/06/2010 16:46

Subject:
[sca-assembly] Required changes to sca-assembly-1.1-test-assertions-cd02.odt,
        TCADMIN-168

Please make the following changes to the submitted document:

1. In the 'This Version' section, please hyperlink the
html and odt files.

2. In the 'Previous Version' section, please
add the following documents: 

http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-test-assertions-cd01.html

http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-test-assertions-cd01.odt

http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-test-assertions-cd01.pdf

<mike> These documents were there, although the
hyperlinks were not correct.  I've fixed those</mike>

3. In the 'Latest Version' section, please hyperlink
the html and odt files.

4. Also in the 'Latest Version section, the pdf file link
is broken. The underlying hyperlink, visible when you roll the cursor over
the link, does not contain the /opencsa/ subdir. Please change as follows: http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-test-assertions.pdf

5. In the 'Technical Committee' section, please
add the following hyperlink:  

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tc_home.php?wg_abbrev=sca-assembly

6. In the 'Chairs' and 'Editors' sections, I
suggest adding email links.

<mike>I have not done this at this time.  I
will raise this question with the Assembly TC and if they decide in favour
of this addition, we shall add the email

addresses in future versions of any specification documents
</mike>

7. In  the 'Related Work' section, please
activate the first hyperlink: 

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/opencsa/scatests/200903.

8. Also, in the 'Related Work' section, please activate
the last hyperlink: 

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ns/opencsa/scatests/bpel/200903.

<mike> The above hyperlinks are in the section "Declared
XML Namespace(s)" - I think that this is correct.  I have ensured
that all 4 have correct hyperlinks </mike>

9. In the 'Normative References' section, the link for
[ASSEMBLY] is broken. The underlying hyperlink, visible when you roll the
cursor over the link, is missing the letter 'h'. Please change from ttp://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd05.pdf to

http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd05.pdf.

7. I suggest changing the 'Non-normative
References' header to 'Non-Normative References'.

8. Please remove empty Appendix B.

9. The appendices are not in the Table of
Contents. Please regenerate the TOC, adding them.

<mike> This is a fault with the OASIS
ODT template - I suggest that this is fixed.  I have fixed this spec
</mike>

Please contact me with any questions.

Thank you,

Kim

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