RE: [sdo] Remaining RFC 2119 comments

Hi,

 

Here are my comments for section 1-3 and 4.7 to the end.

 

By mistake I didn’t use a clean copy of Ron’s draft
but Bryan’s version from August 26th (comments  for 4.10 –
7.11).

 

Best regards,

Ulf

 

From: Bryan Aupperle
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Sent: Tuesday, September 01, 2009 9:44 PM

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Subject: [sdo] Remaining RFC 2119 comments

 

Same approach
as with my second draft.  This starts with a clean version of Ron's draft
 and covers Sections 1-3 and 8 to the end. 

Bryan Aupperle, Ph.D.

STSM, WebSphere Enterprise Platform Software Solution Architect

Research Triangle Park,  NC 

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