[security-services] comments on (most of) core-25

All, The attached are my comments on the first part
of core-25. More to follow as I get time.

My overall impression is that more work is needed and
that that work shouldn't result in something that looks
exactly like its been done by committee (which the 
current documents certainly do, probably unavoidably).
I'd suggest sending some off to the wilderness with
all the comments received and seeing what they come
back with. Not all the work is editorial, I don't 
believe the current documents are sufficient for 
someone (actually *anyone*) to implement from and 
achieve interop, in fact that's probably some 
way away.

I know this is a variation of the "issues" document
approach, but IMO it'd produce a better result assuming
a reasonable editor. (As an aside, I found the issues
document unusable since it doesn't seem to correlate 
with the document structure - let me know if I missed
out on the secret chant that makes it magically work:-)

Regards,
Stephen.

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