[security-services] Draft-sstc-sec-consider-03a.doc

A new rev containing only the editorial changes Eve requested.

C.

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Eve L. Maler [mailto:] 
> Sent: Wednesday, January 09, 2002 5:08 PM
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> Subject: Re: [security-services] Draft-sstc-sec-consider-03.doc
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> 
> Editorial suggestions (most can wait, but a few need to be 
> done before the 
> big deadline):
> 
> - Remove the 02a revision history row (it was just for 
> internal consumption).
> - Change the Status to mention the security-services-comment 
> list instead 
> of being inwardly focused.
> - Remove the change tracking.
> - When referring to sections, s/section/Section/
> - Where footnotes just provide citations, add a bibliography 
> entry in the 
> back and a cross-reference in the text.
> - Ensure that cross-references to bibliography entries are 
> "extra"; the 
> flow of sentences shouldn't rely on their presence.
> 
> 
> 
> At 04:46 PM 1/9/02 -0400, Chris McLaren wrote:
> >Here's the latest, incorporating the following:
> >
> >1) Eve's changes
> >2) My changes in response to Eve's comments
> >3) Comments and changes from Prateek
> >4) Filling in my TBDs
> >5) Added a section on Key Management (background on the 
> limitations of
> >security based on key-to-identity binding strength)
> >6) Added a Privacy section. This is basically a comment that 
> you should
> >keep private things confidential combined with a section on anonymity
> >that is based pretty heavily on Marlena's notes to the list.
> >
> >I am looking forward to comments and additional text from 
> everyone, as
> >they review the document.
> >
> >C.
> 
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