Re: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Review of Deliverable 1 by Patrick Durusau

Steve

I had in fact prepared Patrick's version, so I have it published now at:
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tm-pubsubj/docs/recommendations/general_pld.htm

I did not want to change the current draft, since I had not enough feedback on it.
As said before, I basically agree with Patrick's rewording, except that I have kept a
section that he would have cut altogether (about Publishers).

Hope that fits better your parser :)

Bernard

----- Message d'origine -----
De : "Steve Pepper" <>
À : "tm-pubsubj-comment" <>
Cc : "Patrick Durusau" <>
Envoyé : jeudi 28 novembre 2002 12:20
Objet : Re: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Review of Deliverable 1 by Patrick Durusau

> Bernard,
>
> At 14:48 18.11.2002 +0100, Bernard Vatant wrote:
> >I'm very pleased myself with Patrick's review, but it brings substantive
> >editorial changes
> >that go further than simple rewording, e.g. getting rid of a certain
> >number of superfluous
> >prose. So, before changing the draft, I've posted Patrick's review for
> >comments at:
> >http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tm-pubsubj/docs/pld/d1review.txt
> >
> >It's a plain text version, tagged by Patrick in original text and proposed
> >corrections.
> >
> >I will send my own comments separately.
>
> I've tried to look at this, but it's difficult in its current form.
> Could I suggest that you prepare a new draft, in HTML, in which you
> include all the changes that you agree with and leave alternative
> formulations in just those places where you disagree? I think that
> would make it much easier for us to have a focused discussion both
> before and during the Baltimore meeting.
>
> Steve
>
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