Editorial comments on TOSCA V2 draft

I attach a word document containing a number of comments on the TOSCA v2 draft.

 

Some of these are pure editorial, e.g. spelling, wording and cut and paste error correction. Other comments fall into these themes:

YAML is the only language

Folded comment style and double quotes

Policy definition in general and period in particular

Node states

Normative types in examples

Environment variables and artefact arguments

Generalization of Get_node_type by allowing node type in node filters

Documentation of optional and required elements

 

Please feel free to create separate threads for any of these which you feel deserve greater attention.

Paul Jordan

OSS Specialist

BT Technology |
Tel: 
+44 (0) 1473629289 |


This email contains information from BT that might be privileged
 or confidential. And it's only meant for the person above. If that's not you, we're sorry - we must have sent it to you by mistake. Please email us to let us know, and don't copy or forward it to anyone else. Thanks.

We monitor our email systems and may record all our emails.

British Telecommunications plc

R/O : 81 Newgate Street, London EC1A 7AJ

Registered in England: No 1800000

 

Attachment:
TOSCA-v2.0-pj.docx

Description: TOSCA-v2.0-pj.docx