Jon,
I'm delighted with the doc at this point. A few minor quibbles:
- "A company that adopts one of these specification...": still a leading
space here.
- "Since these methodologies are general...": another leading space.
- I still think that the list of context drivers looks a little funky
without bullets. Maybe if we put it into two columns?
Otherwise it looks ready for prime time to me.
Matt
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jon Bosak [mailto:]
> Sent: Tuesday, December 04, 2001 2:45 AM
> To:
> Subject: [ubl-msc] UBL white paper v. 0.13
>
>
> [This is a repeat of an earlier message that didn't come through
> correctly.]
>
> Members of the MSC,
>
> Attached (if everything goes right) are PDF and SO6 versions of
> the latest draft of the UBL white paper originated by Matt Gertner
> at the UBL TC meeting 30 and 31 October 2001 and worked on
> subsequently by the people who are now consitituted as the MSC.
>
> Jon
>
