"Michael S. Tsirkin" <> writes:
> OK rusty and me addressed these comments, except two items:
>
>> Paul Knight wrote:
>> > -- Add a "/" after "Committee Specification Draft 01" then a soft
>> return and
>> > then, aligned under "Committee Spec…" put "Public Review Draft 01". For
>> an
>> > example, see
>> > http://docs.oasis-open.org/pkcs11/pkcs11-curr/v2.40/csprd01/pkcs11-curr-v2.40-csprd01.html
>
> In this example, there's no break after "/" and neither is there
> in the CMIS specification. I decided we should go by these examples so no
> break here either - it looks prettier.
I think Paul is referring to the one on the title pagem where it's:
Committee Specification Public Review Draft /
Public Review Draft 01
Which looks correct.
>> Chet Ensign wrote:
>> > -- If possible, in the PDF, align the left margins. That
>> > is, align
>> "This
>> > version:" etc. with "Specification URIs". Not aligned now.
>> >
>
> I could not figure how to fixing this one out yet. As this is
> cosmetic and does not affect page numbering etc, I think we can
> if necessary fix it after we vote, but pls note it appears like
> this in e.g. CMIS.
Hmm, I thought I fixed this, but obviously didn't. Not sure either...
Thanks,
Rusty.
