On Thu, 2 Jul 2015 10:34:41 +0200
Paolo Bonzini <> wrote:
> >> +In this case, it might be benefitial for the reader to focus on
> >
> > s/benefitial/beneficial/
> >
> >> +sections tagged "Legacy Interface" in the section title.
> >> +These highlight the changes made since these earlier drafts.
> >
> > ", as these highlight the changes made since the earlier drafts."
>
> I prefer Michael's version for this sentence. English strongly prefers
> simpler sentences, or so I was explained by native speakers. This is
> unlike Italian, and my high school experience dealing with Kant suggests
> that German is similar. :)
Heh, I'd already have classified that as a simple sentence :) But no
objections from my side. I'd still prefer s/these/the/, though.
