On 03/14/2018 04:46 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
> These patches tweak the wording and fix typos in v10 of the packed ring layout
> spec.
All your changes made sense to me (but I'm certainly no authority
when it comes to grammar).
>
> Michael: Feel free to squash this into your patch series if you agree with the
> changes. I don't mind if my authorship disappears.
>
> Stefan Hajnoczi (7):
> packed-ring: add missing articles to sentences
> packed-ring: add missing comma
> packed-ring: fix 'contigious' typo
> packed-ring: fix capitalization of names
> packed-ring: fix plurals
> packed-ring: fix "the descriptor flags +field+ is updated"
> packed-ring: rephrase "an example driver code"
>
> packed-ring.tex | 110 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------------
> 1 file changed, 55 insertions(+), 55 deletions(-)
>
