On Fri, Feb 05, 2021 at 04:34:39PM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote:
> On Fri, 5 Feb 2021 09:39:10 -0500 > "Michael S. Tsirkin" <> wrote: > >
> On Thu, Feb 04, 2021 at 12:16:10PM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote: > >
> On Wed, 3 Feb 2021 17:45:53 -0500 > > > "Michael S. Tsirkin" <> wrote: > > >
> > >
> we don't have multiple documents. > > >
> we expect to deliver specifications periodically. > > > > > > >
> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <> > > > > --- > > >
> charter.html
2 +- > > >
> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) > > > > > > >
> diff --git a/charter.html b/charter.html > > >
> index f3a34f3..11c6f70 100644 > > > > --- a/charter.html > > > > +++ b/charter.html > > > > @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ > > > >
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</ol> > > > >
<p> > > > > -
We anticipate deliverables (1) and (2) to be a single work, and (3) and (4) to be separate works. The projected delivery dates are 12 to 16 months after the first meeting. > > > > +
The projected delivery dates for the specifications are each 12 to 16 months.
> > > > >
> Maybe > > > > > > "The projected delivery dates for the specifications are a deliverable > >
> every 12 to 16 months." > > > > > > ?
> > >
> Don't really like the repeated "delivery/deliverable". Do you prefer >
> every to each then? >
> I slightly prefer "every"; but would like feedback from a native
> speaker on that.
OK I made the change. > > > > > > > > > >
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> > > > >
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