NEW ISSUE: run-on sentence in sect 2

Title: runon sentence in section 2

Description:

The following sentence at line of CD4
draft  is what most would consider to be a run-on sentence.

        The
WS-ReliableMessaging specification defines an interoperable protocol that
requires a Reliable

        Messaging
(RM) Source and Reliable Messaging Destination to ensure that each message
transmitted by

        the
RM Source is accepted by an RM Destination, or barring acceptance, that
an RM Source can, except

        in
the most extreme circumstances, accurately determine the disposition of
each message transmitted as

        perceived
by the RM Destination, so as to resolve any in-doubt status regarding receipt
of the messages

        transmitted.

Target: spec

Type: editorial

Proposal:

Replace the sentence starting on line
of CD4 draft with the following:

The WS-ReliableMessaging specification
defines an interoperable protocol that enables a Reliable

Messaging (RM) Source to accurately
determine the disposition of each message it transmits as

perceived by the RM Destination, so
as to allow it to resolve any in-doubt status regarding receipt of the
messages

transmitted. The protocol also enables
an RM Destination to efficiently determine which of those messages it receives

have been previously received, enabling
it to filter out duplicate message transmissions caused by the retransmission,

by the RM Source, of perceived unacknowledged
messages.. It also enables an RM Destination to deliver the messages 

it receives to the Application Destination
in the order in which they were sent by an Application Source, in the event
that they 

are received out of order.

Cheers,

Christopher Ferris

STSM, Software Group Standards Strategy

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