NEW ISSUE: editorial clarify second bullet in Protocol Invariants

Title:  editorial clarify second
bullet in Protocol Invariants

Description:

the second bullet, on line 219 of CD4
draft, could be clearer, and use the defined

terms appropriately.

target: spec

type: editorial

Proposal:

Change:

line 219: Within every acknowledgement
it issues, the RM Destination MUST include one or more

acknowledgement ranges that contain
the message number of every message accepted by the RM

Destination. The RM Destination MUST
exclude the message numbers of any messages it has not

accepted.

to:

line 219: Within every Acknowledgement
Message it issues, the RM Destination MUST include one or more

<AcknowledgementRange> child elements
that contain, in their collective ranges, the message numbers of every
message 

accepted by the RM Destination. The
RM Destination MUST exclude, in the <AcknowledgementRange> elements,

the message numbers of any messages
it has not accepted.

Cheers,

Christopher Ferris

STSM, Software Group Standards Strategy

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