Issue PR027: Editorial comments on WS-SecurityPolicy Public Reviewdocument

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Protocol:  ws-securitypolicy

http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/200702/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-cd-02-diff.pdf

Artifact:  spec / schema

Type: editorial

Title: 

Description: Editorial comments on WS-SecurityPolicy Public Review document

Multiple sections, lines 456, 505,536, 586, 613

Difficult to parse. 

Proposal: Replace "binding specific" with "binding-specific" 

multiple sections, lines 730, 734:

intended use outside the scope of this specification is immaterial 

Proposal: replace "is intended to be used" with "may be used" 

section 5.2.2 -- line 733:

verb usage

Proposal: Replace "points" with "pointing" 

section 5.4.11 -- line 1552 :

plural agreement

Proposal: Replace "by another specifications" with "in other specifications" 

section 8.6 -- line 2460 :

only modifies when, not used

Proposal: Replace "only used when" with "used only when" 

Related issues:

None.

Proposed Resolution:

See Description