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Changes Required to Submitted Document (TCADMIN-196)

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Lim Hoolsby
Date
2010-07-12T19:33:25+00:00
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Changes Required to Submitted Document (TCADMIN-196)
Please make the following required changes to document /ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-03:

1. For 'This Version', the underlying hyperlinks are incorrect. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-032.doc  to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-03.doc. Please make this change for the html & pdf files as well.

2. For 'Previous Version', the underlying hyperlinks are incorrect. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-021.doc  to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples-cd-02.doc. Please make this change for the html & pdf files as well.

3. In 'Normative References', [RFC2119] was somehow dropped between cd02 and cd03. Please re-add to cd03.

4. In 'Normative References', [WS-SECURITYPOLICY] contains an invalid underlying hyperlink. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/200702/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-os.doc%20http:/www.oasis-open.org/specs/index.php#wssecpolv1.2 to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/200702/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-os.doc.

5. In 'Non-Normative References', WSSX-PRE-INTEROP contains an invalid link. Please change from http://www.oasis open.org/committees/download.php/16357/Trust_SecureConversation_Interop.2004-10.doc to http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/security-policy/examples/ws-sp-usecases-examples.html.

6. In 'Non-Normative References', WS-SECURE-INTEROP contains an invalid underlying hyperlink. Please change from  http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/28803/ws-sx-secure-message-examples.doc%20http:/www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=28803&wg_abbrev=ws-sx to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/28803/ws-sx-secure-message-examples.doc

7. In 'Non-Normative References',  WSI-SCM-SAMPLEAPPL contains the following login required link:  http://www.ws-i.org/SampleApplications/SupplyChainManagement/2006-04/SCMSecurityArchitectureWGD5.00.doc (login required). Please change to http://java.sun.com/webservices/docs/1.4/wsi-sampleapp/index.html

8. For 'References', it is preferable to have the hyperlink point to the document at doc.oasis-open.org server rather than /oasis-open.org/committees/. Please change the links on the following references:

Normative:

* [WSS11-SOAPMSG] 

* [WSS11-USERNAME] 

* [WSS11-X509-PROFILE]

* [WSS11-SAML1120-PROFILE]  

* [WSS-TC-ALL-TOKEN-PROFILES]

* [SAML11-CORE]

Non-Normative:

* WSS10-INTEROP-01

* WSS10-INTEROP-02

* WSS11-INTEROP-01

* WSS10-KERBEROS-INTEROP

* WSS10-SAML11-INTEROP

* WSS11-SAML1120-INTEROP

* WSSX-PRE-INTEROP

* WSSX-WSTR-WSSC-INTEROP

* WS-SECURE-INTEROP

Thank you,

Kim

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Kim Goolsby
Publications Specialist
OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society

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