Can you please give a URL for the exact version of the document you are
commenting on?
/paulc
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Granqvist, Hans [mailto:]
> Sent: March 2, 2005 1:17 PM
> To: ''
> Subject: [wss] WSS spec legibility
>
> Hi all,
>
> The WSS spec is not trivial to read and understand, but it seems
> it has been made a bit harder to read than is necessary.
>
> Two things in particular: Too little whitespace between paragraphs,
> and inconsistent use of bullet lists.
>
> To see what I mean: Look at sections before and after "8.2 Signing
> Messages" for an example of the whitespace issue. The blocks of text
> are typographically hard to read.
>
> See sections "9.3.1 Encryption" and "9.3.2 Decryption" (sections
> 9.4.1 and 9.4.2 in latest 1.1 draft) for some inconsistency in bullet
> list use.
>
> It'd be great if we could fix at least the whitespace problem for
> the next draft.
>
> Thanks,
> Hans
>
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