RE: [xacml] Changes required to submitted document - XACML TC -Request for Second Public Review

This 
request is for IPC. Erik is not the editor.

 

Hal

  
-----Original Message-----
From: Mary McRae 
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Sent: Tuesday, April 27, 2010 
  10:15 PM
To: Erik Rissanen
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  Kim Goolsby
Subject: Re: [xacml] Changes required to submitted 
  document - XACML TC - Request for Second Public Review

Hi 
  Eric,
  

  
  Unfortunately that's not what was submitted; Hal's request 
  dated 22 April is incorporated below.

  

  
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From: Harold Lockhart <>

  
Subject: XACML TC - Request for Second Public 
  Review

  
Date: April 22, 2010 10:40:56 AM EDT

  
To: Tc-Admin (E-mail) <>

  
Cc: Bill Parducci (E-mail) <>, Tolbert, John W 
  <>

  

  
At the April 8 meeting of the XACML TC, the TC voted to request a second 
  public review of 15 days for XACML Intellectual Property Control  (IPC) 
  profile Version 1.0 Committee draft 2.

The document contains a 
  designated cross-reference as defined in TC Process section 2.19. It is 
  understood that this may delay the date the spec reaches approved 
  status.

The designated cross-reference is:

eXtensible Access 
  Control Markup Language (XACML) Version 3.0 Committee Draft 03
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37088/xacml-3.0-core-spec-cd-03-en.zip
It 
  is expected to become an OASIS Standard by December 31, 2010.

The 
  minutes of the meeting are here:

http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/xacml/201004/msg00012.html

The 
  document is here:

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37055/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.doc

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37077/xacml-3%200-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.pdf

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37054/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.htm

The 
  announcement of the first public review is here:

http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/tc-announce/200910/msg00013.html

The 
  log of changes made since the first public review is here:

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/36727/IPC%20change%20log.doc

Hal 
  Lockhart
Bill Pardicci

  
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On Apr 27, 2010, at 9:29 PM, Erik Rissanen wrote:

  
    
Kim,

I don't know what went 
    wrong, but you have been reviewing the wrong version. It is CD-03 which has 
    been (or should have been) submitted to public review and I believe these 
    issues (or at least most of them) have been already fixed.

Best 
    regards,
Erik

On 2010-04-27 15:10, Kim Goolsby wrote: 
    
      

      
http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-138

      

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37055/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.doc 
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37077/xacml-3%200-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.pdf 
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37054/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.htm  

      

      
As 
      I check this spec for QC, I've noted the following changes that 
      need to be made:

      

      
        
The 
        specification title, 'profile' should be initial 
        cap.

        
The stage should 
        be initial cap.

        
The HTML as 
        created out of Word cannot be uploaded by itself; any images or other 
        external resources will be lost. When saving as HTML Word creates both 
        an html file and a folder that contains these resources. The resulting 
        set must be uploaded as a zip into Kavi in order to be 
        complete. 

        
This Version 
        link has changed directories from the original CD01 upload. The 
        directory location must remain the same. In addition, pdf and html files 
        must be listed. Please designate one file as 
        'Authoritative'.

        
Previous 
        version: the link is not in the proper location of the CD01 files. In 
        addition, pdf and html files must be 
        listed.
  
        
The Latest 
        Version URIs are incorrect and do not correspond to the CD01 
        files. 

        
Related work: 
        this should be hypertext linked to the actual specification 
        referenced.

        
Status links, 
        which were correct in CD01, are once again 
        broken. 

        
Notices, last 
        paragraph, please remove bracketed section, which reads ' [insert 
        specific trademarked names and abbreviations here] & need to link 
        OASIS to its homepage]'.

        
OASIS 
        references, which were correct in CD01, are improperly 
        formatted. 

        
Please either 
        remove extraneous links to XACMLIntro or provide full citation 
        information for each. 

      

      

      

      

      
I'm happy 
      to answer any questions you might have about these 
      changes.

      

      

      

      

      

      

      

      

      

      

      
Regards,

      
Kim

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      standards for the information society
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