[OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (CAMP-118) 4.3.2.4 services - "application in"?

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Martin Chapman  updated CAMP-118:
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    Proposal: 
  change: This node describes the services that the application in the PDP requires in order to function 
   to: This node describes the services required by the application.

> 4.3.2.4 services - "application in"?
> ------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: CAMP-118
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/CAMP-118
>             Project: OASIS Cloud Application Management for Platforms (CAMP) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Public Review
>            Reporter: Gilbert Pilz
>            Assignee: Gilbert Pilz
>
> From the comment list: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/201309/msg00078.html 
> TAB issue: https://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TAB-93
> 4.3.2.4 currently reads: 
> ***** 
> This node describes the services that the application in the PDP requires in order to function. 
> ***** 
> "in the PDP" don't we mean "described in a PDP"? 
> Suggest: 
> ***** 
> The services node specifies the services required by an application described in a PDP. 
> ***** 
> Removes the ambiguity of "in order to function." Don't know what "function" means and it could vary from application to application.

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