[OASIS Issue Tracker] (DSSX-35) Public Comment 201809c00001s11: Align wording with common terms

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Andreas Kuehne updated DSSX-35:
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       Summary: Public Comment 201809c00001s11: Align wording with common terms  (was: Public Comment 201809c00001s11)
    Resolution: changed 'update' to 'augment' at the corresponding locations

> Public Comment 201809c00001s11: Align wording with common terms
> ---------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DSSX-35
>                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/DSSX-35
>             Project: OASIS Digital Signature Services eXtended (DSS-X) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>    Affects Versions: PRD01
>            Reporter: Andreas Kuehne
>            Assignee: Andreas Kuehne
>            Priority: Major
>              Labels: PRD01_COMMENT, TC_ESI
>             Fix For: csprd02
>
>
> Comments from TC ESI to OASIS DSS-X TC on DSS-X V2 - 11 of 19 submitted by Liaison Andreas Kuehne on behalf of Sonia Companies via message Â[201809c00001|http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/dss-x-comment/201809/msg00001.html]Âper attachment with accessibility issues (word file)
> {quote}following steering committee call on 17/09 and addition of 2 other editorial comments, the resulting pre-agreed comments are now for ESI approval for submission to OASIS DSS-X TC by 28 September
> {quote}
> h2. Comment #11:
> |Clause 6.3.1 Sub process âupdate Signatureâ.
> Â
> COMMENT: in the title and within the text of the clause the term âupdate of signatureâ is used, which seems a problem inherited from version 1.0. Now the new term for this process is augment and augmented signature, according to AdES terminology in ETSI ENs.
> Â
> REQUEST:
> 1.ÂÂÂÂÂ Replace the title by âaugmentation of signatureâ.
> 2.ÂÂÂÂÂ Replace âupdateâ by âaugmentâ or âaugmentationâ depending on the context.
> 3.ÂÂÂÂÂ Replace ReturnUpdatedSignature by ReturnAugmentedSignature.|
> |CONCLUSION: Pass the comment to DSS-X.|



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