[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (MQTT-28) Typo comments on 2.1.2.2 and 2.1.2.3 in WD04

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Rahul Gupta commented on MQTT-28:
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In WD-05
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1) line 366 - This field indicates the level of assurance for delivery of a PUBLISH control packet. The QoS levels are shown in the table below.

2) line 374 - This flag is only used on PUBLISH control packet. 
   line 376 - If 1, in a PUBLISH packet sent by a client to a server
   line 381 - If 0, in a PUBLISH packet sent by a client to a server

3) line 377 - has been delivered to the current subscribers whose subscriptions match the  topic

4) line 385 - The server MUST set the RETAIN bit to 1

5) line 426 - For instance the server implementation might store a retained publication in volatile memory and thus lose the message if the server is restarted.

> Typo comments on 2.1.2.2 and 2.1.2.3 in WD04
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>                 Key: MQTT-28
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-28
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: edits
>            Reporter: Peter Niblett
>            Assignee: Rahul Gupta
>            Priority: Trivial
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> 1.  Section 2.1.2.2 (QoS) starts with the words " This flag".  It's not really a flag as it is a 2 byte quantity. How about "This field.." ?
> 2. There are three references to PUBLISH  in 2.1.2.3.  One of them is just "PUBLISH" while two are "MQTT PUBLISH".  I think everyone knows that we are doing MQTT, so we don't need to call them "MQTT PUBLISH".
> 3. Typo "whos" in line 321
> 4. Typo "REATAIN" in line 329
> 5. Typo "loose" instead of "lose" in line 336

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