[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (MQTT-26) Typographical improvements to section 2.1.1 of WD04

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Rahul Gupta commented on MQTT-26:
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In WD-07
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1) line 269 - The enumeration for MQTT Control packet types is shown in the table below.

2) Typo is fixed

3) fixed capitalisation in descreption column

> Typographical improvements to section 2.1.1 of WD04
> ---------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: MQTT-26
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-26
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: edits
>            Reporter: Peter Niblett
>            Assignee: Rahul Gupta
>            Priority: Minor
>
> 1. Second sentence says "The enumerations for this version of the protocol are shown...".  This reads a bit strangely
> a) I would say either "enumeration" or "values", not "enumerations"
> b) It's not necessary to say "this version of the protocol"
> 2. Typo in PUBREC (Etiter)
> 3.  Inconsistent capitalisation of words in the Description column. I favour having capitals only on the first word of each description.

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