[OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (MQTT-165) 2.1.2.1 Dup

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Richard Coppen updated MQTT-165:
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             Assignee: Peter Niblett
    Affects Version/s: 3.1.1
          Component/s: edits

Peter, you've mentioned that you felt this text was confusing previously - could you take a look at it ?

> 2.1.2.1 Dup
> -----------
>
>                 Key: MQTT-165
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/MQTT-165
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: edits
>    Affects Versions: 3.1.1
>         Environment: Grammar
>            Reporter: Patrick Durusau
>            Assignee: Peter Niblett
>            Priority: Trivial
>
> 2.1.2.1 Dup reads in part:
> *****
> If Dup is 0 then the flow is the first occasion that the Client or Server has attempted to send the MQTT PUBLISH Packet.
> ....
> The Dup flag MUST be set to 1 by the Client or Server when it attempts to re-deliver a PUBLISH Packet
> *****
> For the first sentence, "...sent the MQTT PUBLISH Packet." should read: "...send a MQTT PUBLISH Packet." Yes?
> That is the same usage you see in the second sentence. 
> The difference being that "a MQTT..." applies to any MQTT... whereas "the MQTT..." means some packet in particular. 
> I haven't scanned to the document for all uses of the definite article and doubt I will have time. Just a word to alert you to the issue, which you already handle correctly in many other cases. 

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