[OASIS Issue Tracker] (MQTT-346) Misplaced comma in Session Expiry Interval?

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Ed Briggs updated MQTT-346:
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Fixed in WD11. Punctuation corrected in the manner suggested in your question about the intention

> Misplaced comma in Session Expiry Interval?
> -------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: MQTT-346
>                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/MQTT-346
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: edits
>    Affects Versions: 5, wd10
>            Reporter: Brian Raymor
>            Assignee: Ed Briggs
>            Priority: Trivial
>             Fix For: 5, wd10
>
>
> The noun for "MUST delete the Session state" is unclear perhaps due to a misplaced comma:
> 953 ... After a network disconnection and the Session Expiry interval has
> 954 elapsed, without a new connection being made the Client and Server, MUST delete the Session state
> 955 they hold.
> Was the intention - "After ... has elapsed without a new connection being made, the Client and Server MUST delete the Session state" ?



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