[OASIS Issue Tracker] (MQTT-362) Consistency: "this" is the next field

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Ken Borgendale commented on MQTT-362:
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In V3.1.1 there was a stated desire to not have a proper noun repeated twice in the same sentence.  This text is unchanged from that spec.

> Consistency: "this" is the next field
> -------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: MQTT-362
>                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/MQTT-362
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: edits
>    Affects Versions: 5, wd10
>            Reporter: Brian Raymor
>            Assignee: Rahul Gupta
>            Priority: Trivial
>             Fix For: 5, wd10
>
>
> Compare:
> 1200 If the Will Flag is set to 1, the Will Topic is the next field ...
> 1203 If the Will Flag is set to 1 the Will Message is the next field ...
> with:
> 1212 If the User Name Flag is set to 1, this is the next field in the payload.
> 1216 If the Password Flag is set to 1, this is the next field in the payload ...
> I prefer the first style - so "If the User Name Flag is set to 1", the User Name is the next field in the payload".



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