[OASIS Issue Tracker] (MQTT-406) 3.8 SUBSCRIBE

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Brian Raymor commented on MQTT-406:
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2211 ... if any [of] Reserved
2212 bits in the payload are non-zero.

1. Delete "of" (or change to "of the")
2. Why is "Reserved" capitalized?

> 3.8 SUBSCRIBE
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>
>                 Key: MQTT-406
>                 URL: https://issues.oasis-open.org/browse/MQTT-406
>             Project: OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: edits
>    Affects Versions: 5, wd10
>            Reporter: Brian Raymor
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 5, wd11
>
>
> 1. The text is redundant with the Figure title:
> 2155 Variable header non normative example
> 2156 Figure 3.21 shows a variable header with Packet Identifier set to 10. 2157 
> 2159 Figure 3.19- Variable header with a Packet Identifier of 10, Non normative example 
>  
> 2. Minor edit - The context is set in the first sentence so the "SUBSCRIBE pakcet payload" does not need to be repeated in the second sentence:
> 2173 The payload of a SUBSCRIBE Packet contains a list of Topic Filters indicating the Topics to which the
> 2174 Client wants to subscribe. The Topic Filters [in a SUBSCRIBE packet payload] MUST be UTF-8 encoded
> 2175 strings as defined in Section 
> Suggestion:
> The Topic Filters MUST be UTF-8 encoded.
> 3. Missing comma
> 2179 characters[,] it MUST reject any Subscription request whose filter contains them
> 4. Redundant not used and reserved
> 2210 Bits 6 and 7 of the Subscription Options byte are not used, and are reserved for future use. 
> Suggestion:
> Bits 6 and 7 of the Subscription Options byte are reserved for future use.
> 5. "if" rather than "is"
> 2188 ... It is a Protocol Error [is] the



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