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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (OBIX-37) Section 4 - Simple editorial comments
Section 4 - Simple editorial comments
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Key: OBIX-37
URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OBIX-37
Project: OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC
Issue Type: Improvement
Components: OBIX 1.1 Specification
Affects Versions: oBIX PR01
Environment: Toby Considine
Reporter: Toby Considine
Assignee: Toby Considine
Priority: Minor
266: "The OBIX object model illustrated below in Figure [x]. It consists of a common base Object (o:obj) and is built of 12 child objects. This section describes the structure of these elements and their attributes ("Facets").
422: The language "All objects support the concept of null. Null is the absence of value" is opaque. Not sure what to suggest as a replacement.
445: Remove first sentence.
453: Add normative reference to PNG
Section 4.18.9 (520-538)
Avoid redefining common internet specification. Reference http://www.iana.org/time-zones . Use RFC6557 as a guide on how to discuss this.
Section 4.18.10. It would be helpful to reference the SI Units document when the term "SI Units" is forst used. http://physics.nist.gov/cuu/Units/units.html Add as a normative reference.
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