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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Created: (OBIX-84) Line 69, editorial, change passive voice to active voice
Line 69, editorial, change passive voice to active voice
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Key: OBIX-84
URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/OBIX-84
Project: OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC
Issue Type: Improvement
Components: OBIX 1.1 Specification
Affects Versions: SOAP WD07
Reporter: Chris Bogen
Priority: Trivial
In lines 69-70,
"Missing from the standard oBIX WSDL is the service element. This element binds a SOAP server instance with a network address."
The first sentence is in an awkward passive voice and the second sentence uses "with" when "to" is more appropriate.
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