#6.5 Errata comment - adding bulleted-list items

["Dennis E. Hamilton" <dennis.hamilton@acm.org>]

Re: http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/200808/msg00059.html

This applies to the single errata comment on

          ODF 1.0     IS 26300
Section   page line   page line

15.36     670  20     683  1

The instruction is to "Insert into the list immediately before 15.36.1:
Transition Type or Family, Transition Subtype, Transition Direction, Fade
Color."

This insertion is into a bulleted list.  Because it is not clear to me how
many list items the insertion represents, I decided that there are four new
bullets and recommend changing the instruction to read "Insert into the list
immediately before 15.36.1 the four additional list items: Transition Type
or Family, Transition Subtype, Transition Direction, Fade Color"

Revised Recommendation:

OO.o allows bulleted lists in table cells in the errata spreadsheet.  So I
would make it

"Insert four additional items at the end of the list immediately before
15.36.1:

   * Transition Type or Family
   * Transition Subtype
   * Transition Direction
   * Fade Color"

using bulleted-list items. 

 - Dennis

-----Original Message-----
From: robert_weir@us.ibm.com [mailto:robert_weir@us.ibm.com] 
Sent: Monday, August 25, 2008 10:24
To: Dennis E. Hamilton; Sheldon Britton; Dave Pawson;
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Cc: office@lists.oasis-open.org; office-comment@lists.oasis-open.org; Mary
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Subject: [office] ODF 1.0 Approved Errata 01 -- Public review comments

The public review period of the ODF 1.0 Approved Errata 01 document 
concluded on Friday, August 22nd..  We are required under OASIS TC Process 
3.2 to take certain actions with respect to these comments, namely:

"The TC must acknowledge the receipt of each comment, track the comments 
received, and publish to its primary e-mail list the disposition of each 
comment at the end of the review period."

 (http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/process.php#publicReview)

The following comments were received during the ODF 1.0 Approved Errata 01 
document public review period:

Dennis E. Hamilton:  
http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/200808/msg00012.html 
Sheldon Britton:  
http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/200808/msg00015.html
Dave Pawson: 
http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/200808/msg00017.html
Murata Mokoto: 
http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/200808/msg00027.html
Murata Mokoto: 
http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/200808/msg00052.html
Dennis E. Hamilton: 
http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/office-comment/200808/msg00059.html

This note constitutes acknowledgement of the receipt of these comments.

The ODF TC, in its 25 August meeting, agreed that it will produce an 
revised draft of this Errata document, addressing some of the comments 
received.  This draft will be sent for an additional 15 days public review 
of changes.  We will also produce a report indicating the disposition of 
all of the above comments.

Regards,

-Rob


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