Re: [regrep] Couple comments on specs

[Farrukh Najmi <Farrukh.Najmi@Sun.COM>]

Hi Kathryn,

Thanks for the comments. I have addressed all of them in 
regrep-3.0-draft-02 versions that are under development. Thanks.

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Breininger, Kathryn R wrote:

>Please list my affiliation as The Boeing Company (official name) on both
>specs.
>
>I believe the colons in the titles of the specs should be removed.  The
>titles in the past versions have not had a colon and subtitle, and make
>more sense as complete titles ("ebXML Registry Information Model" and
>"ebXML Registry Services and Protocols").  Additionally, these specs
>have been referred to RIM and RS, and putting in the colon breaks the
>titles in two so these acronyms do not make as much sense (now it would
>be S&P and IM?).  In general, you want to avoid subtitles when a
>complete title is clear and makes sense.
>
>In RIM document: 
>Line 309 - consider changing "object" to "asset" so that this does not
>get confused with later references to Registry Objects
>Line 330 - sentence starting with "In the following..." needs to be
>revised.  Maybe something like: "In the example below, information in
>bold is what the reader should be focusing on."
>Line 369 - In addition to the RepositoryItems, an ebXML Registry - or is
>it Repository?? - is also capable of storing...?  (says in the line
>above that RepositoryItems are stored in the repository...)
>In several places - "refered" should be "referred".
>Line 415 - place the figure before the figure caption, so the caption
>appears under the figure.
>
>More later...
>
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Regards,
Farrukh