Re: [sca-bindings] [Issue 2] Inlined proposal v5

[Anish Karmarkar <Anish.Karmarkar@oracle.com>]

Simon Nash wrote:
> Anish,
> Here are my comments on this version:
> 
>  1. In section 5.1, first paragraph, change "see the Appendix E"
>     to "see Appendix E".
> 

Fixed in v6, which I will send shortly.

>  2. In the text for BWS50005, remove ", as specified in BWS50003"
>     from the end of the sentence.  Reason: There is no longer a
>     conformance statement BWS50003.
> 

Fixed in v6.

>  3. Change the title of section 5.2 to "SCA Web Services Callback
>     Protocol with WS-MakeConnection".  Reason: This section is no longer
>     defining an additional protocol.  It is explaining how the protocol
>     already defined in section 5.1 ("SCA Web Services Callback Protocol")
>     can be composed with the WS-MakeConnection specification.
> 

Fixed in v6.

>  4. In section 5.3, second sentence, change "...requirements for
>     implementing SCA Web Services Callback Protocol (see SCA Web Services
>     Callback Protocol), ..." to "...requirements for implementing SCA Web
>     Services Callback Protocol, ...".  Reason: The parenthetical clause
>     is repetitious and conveys no useful information.
> 

Fixed in v6.

>  5. In section 5.3.1, last sentence, change "requirements on forward
>     request message" to "requirements on the forward request message".
> 

Fixed in v6.

>  6. In section 5.3.2, last sentence, change "specifies that WSCallback
>     protocol is used" to "specifies that SCA Web Services Callback
>     Protocol is used".
> 

Fixed in v6.

>  7. In section 6.2, replace numbered item 3 by the following:
>      3. The implementation MAY support the SCA Web Services Callback 
> Protocol
>         in conjunction with WS-MakeConnection. If it does, it MUST 
> comply with
>         all statements in Appendix B: Conformance Items for the SCA Web 
> Services
>         Callback Protocol and it MUST comply with the requirements of
>         WS-MakeConnection.
>     Reason: See comment 3 above.
> 

Fixed in v6.

>   Simon
> 
> Anish Karmarkar wrote:
>> Attached.
>>
>> This proposal consists of taking the inlined proposal v4 produced by 
>> MikeE [1] and applying it to CD02 rev4. On top of that I have made the 
>> following changes (based on the last call where we discussed v4):
>> 1) Included a pointer to the appendix examples from section 5.2
>> 2) Missing 2119 statement tags are added.
>> 3) Fixed cross-references and 2119 stmt highlighing.
>> 4) Deleted all the MAY statements that were unnecessary.
>> 5) Replaced lowercase 2119 keywords with appropriate non-keyword 
>> substitutes
>> 6) Made the protocol composable with WS-MC without introducing 
>> additional conformance points.
>>
>> -Anish
>> -- 
>>
>> [1] 
>> http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-bindings/200905/msg00098.html
>>
>>
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