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Issue 5 - Conceptual - Market Growth - open


Title: New Issue - Conceptual - Market Growth Nig: I’m OK with your proposed re-wording. Comments from other TC members? Peter From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Monday, 28 February, 2011 04:19 To: TGF TC List Subject: [tgf] New Issue - Conceptual - Market Growth Line 253 All interested parties should be able to participate – this is what the franchise model is about. Also the last clause has a wor missing. I suggest replacing it with “….- so build “customer franchises” that enable the market and others to work with you to deliver jointly-owned objectives.” Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU SERVICES Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN Tel: +44 (0) 843 354 5637 Internal: 7302 5637 Mob : +44 (0) 7867 833147 Internal: 7383 3147 E-mail: [email protected] Web: http://uk.fujitsu.com Fujitsu Services Limited, Registered in England no 96056, Registered Office 22 Baker Street, London, W1U 3BW This e-mail is only for the use of its intended recipient. Its contents are subject to a duty of confidence and may be privileged. Fujitsu Services does not guarantee that this e-mail has not been intercepted and amended or that it is virus-free.

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