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Today's motion to approve Working Draft 02

From: Chris Parker <[email protected]>
To: [email protected]
Date: Thu, 17 Mar 2011 17:26:00 -0000

Here is my suggested draft to meet Trond’s point: “Over recent years, several governments have published a wide range of Policy Products as part of their work on Interoperability Frameworks and Enterprise Architectures, and there is significant good practice in these which other governments are able to draw on these as reference models when developing their own Policy Products. However, we believe that no government has yet set out a full framework of the Policy Products required to ensure that a holistic, government - wide vision for transformation can be delivered is much broader than is currently being addressed in most Interoperability Frameworks and Enterprise Architectures.” Chris Parker Managing Partner, CS Transform Ltd, +44 7951 754 060 From: Peter F Brown [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: 17 March 2011 16:59 To: TGF TC List Subject: [tgf] Today's motion to approve Working Draft 02 Hi: We are due to discuss and vote on approving TGF Primer Working Draft 02 as a formal Committee Note Draft. There have been no substantial new comments or issues raised, but only a small number of editorial changes, that have been mentioned on the list. To clarify therefore, I would like us to vote to approve v2 with the following changes : Lines 241 and 275 – CSF diagram updated from ‘Do-Ability’ to ‘Achievable Delivery’; Lines 432 and 1332 – change ‘Channel Management’ to ‘Channel Transformation’; Line 1210 – remove line and comment regarding reference to IDM standards; Line 1301 – change ‘Web 2.0 technologies’ to ‘technologies’; Add names of editors; Add names of TC members to list in Acknowledgements, and that the duly modified draft be assigned v3 and submitted to TC Admin for approval… Talk soon! Regards, Peter Peter F Brown Independent Consultant Transforming our Relationships with Information Technologies Web www.peterfbrown.com Blog pensivepeter.wordpress.com LinkedIn www.linkedin.com/in/pensivepeter Twitter @pensivepeter P.O. Box 49719, Los Angeles, CA 90049, USA Tel: +1.310.694.2278