Re: [virtio-comment] [PATCH] virtio-net: add missing articles for new hdr_len feature

[Cornelia Huck <cohuck@redhat.com>]

On Wed, 20 Nov 2019 06:16:21 -0500
"Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote:

> On Wed, Nov 20, 2019 at 11:10:23AM +0000, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
> > On Wed, Nov 20, 2019 at 09:29:41AM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote:  
> > > Signed-off-by: Cornelia Huck <cohuck@redhat.com>
> > > ---
> > > 
> > > Note: I have not added definite articles to the feature description; _all_
> > > features for virtio-net are described in that way, and we should add them
> > > in one go should we decide to change that.
> > > 
> > > ---
> > >  content.tex | 6 +++---
> > >  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
> > > 
> > > diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex
> > > index 5d3f865956aa..452763bbbbc4 100644
> > > --- a/content.tex
> > > +++ b/content.tex
> > > @@ -3100,8 +3100,8 @@ \subsubsection{Packet Transmission}\label{sec:Device Types / Network Device / De
> > >    \begin{itemize}
> > >    \item If the VIRTIO_NET_F_GUEST_HDRLEN feature has been negotiated,
> > >      \field{hdr_len} indicates the header length that needs to be replicated
> > > -    for each packet. It's a number of bytes from beginning of the packet
> > > -    to beginning of the transport payload.
> > > +    for each packet. It's a number of bytes from the beginning of the packet
> > > +    to the beginning of the transport payload.  
> > 
> > Another opportunity to tweak the text:
> > s/a number of bytes/the number of bytes/ is slightly clearer
> > 
> > Reviewed-by: Stefan Hajnoczi <stefanha@redhat.com>  
> 
> Post a patch? Or are you asking Cornelia to integrate that into hers?
> 

That tweak makes sense; I'll send a v2.