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Re: [virtio] We need fixes to the csd and csprd before we can load them
On Mon, Mar 24, 2014 at 02:29:03PM -0400, Chet Ensign wrote:
> First of all, best wishes to you and your family. I still recall the excitement
> when my daughter was born! >
> We noted that the TeX was voted as authoritative. If that is the case then
> you'll need to add the TeX directory to the This version and Latest version
> links and - is there a master driver file from which all the others are
> processed or assembled? I never did work with TeX but assuming there is, that I
> suppose would be the file to point to. You'll also have to take the > (Authoritative) designation off the PDF files.
Hmm yes but the master file is mostly empty - it just has names of included sub-files. I think it's best to point at a zip archive with all the necessary files. Is that OK? >
> On Sun, Mar 23, 2014 at 9:45 PM, Rusty Russell <[email protected]> wrote: >
>
Hi, >
>
My wife went into labor on Friday morning, so things are a bit
>
hectic here. Michael, can you please organise this? >
>
We had voted to make the TeX source authoritative for this version, BTW. >
>
Thanks,
>
Rusty. > >
"Michael S. Tsirkin" <[email protected]> writes: >
> On Thu, Mar 20, 2014 at 01:15:13PM -0400, Chet Ensign wrote: >
>> Members of the VIRTIO TC, >
>> >
>> We are working on your Committee Spec Draft and public review for the
>
2nd csprd >
>> for VIRTIO ( https://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-1638 and >
/ >
>> tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-1641). >
>> >
>> In working on these, we have encountered some items that need to be
>
fixed. As >
>> you produce the documents, we ask that you make these and send us an
>
updated >
>> set of zip files. Here is what we need: >
>> >
>> 1) cover page changes needed for csd02 >
>> >
>> - This version: >
>> >
>> -- both tex and pdf are listed as authoritative. obviously 2 versions
>
can’t be >
>> authoritative. since pdf has been authoritative before, it seems best to
>
stay >
>> with that but regardless, please indicate one authoritative source >
(Latest, >
>> Previous, This) >
>> >
>> -- assuming PDF is labelled authoritative, remove /tex directory. It is >
>> indicated in the Additional artifacts section below >
>> >
>> - Previous version: >
>>
--
Change links to >
>> http://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v1.0/csprd01/
>
virtio-v1.0-csprd01.pdf >
>> http://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v1.0/csprd01/
>
virtio-v1.0-csprd01.html >
>> >
>>
--
Label the PDF version (Authoritative) >
>> >
>> - Latest version: >
>>
--
Label the PDF version (Authoritative) >
>> >
>> - Editors: >
>>
--
Pawel’s link under ARM goes to a download page not to the company
>
page. >
>> Should be changed to http://www.arm.com >
>> >
>> - Citation format: >
>> We updated our citation model a few months ago to include the editors
>
and the >
>> Latest version link. Please update the citation block to read: >
>> >
>> [VIRTIO-v1.0] >
>> >
>> <italics>Virtual I/O Device (VIRTIO)
Version 1.0</>. Edited by Michael
>
S. >
>> Tsirkin, Cornelia Huck, and Pawel Moll. 11 March 2014. OASIS Committee >
>> Specification Draft 02. http://docs.oasis-open.org/virtio/virtio/v1.0/
>
csd02/ >
>> virtio-v1.0-csd02.html. Latest version: http://docs.oasis-open.org/
>
virtio/ >
>> virtio/v1.0/virtio-v1.0.html. >
>> >
>> *Note that “OASIS” is also added before “Committee Specification Draft
>
02” for >
>> the csd and before "Committee Specification Draft 02 / Public Review
>
Draft 02" >
>> for the csprd. >
>> >
>> - Notices: >
>> Set copyright year to 2014 >
>> >
>> - In PDF, for footer: >
>> Set copyright year to 2014. >
>> >
>> 2) cover page changes needed for csprd02: >
>> >
>> - Same changes as for the csd02 files. >
>> >
>>
--
Plus: The ZIP file contains all the individual html files for the
>
footnotes, >
>> but they are not needed. They should be removed. I think the TC removed
>
them >
>> in the csd02 files, but not in the csprd02 files. (csprd02 footnotes
>
work fine >
>> without the files - the footnotes are embedded and linked in the main >
.html >
>> file.) >
>> >
>>
--
We need a red-lined DIFF file in PDF between csprd02 and csprd01 that >
>> displays the changes. We point out this to reviewers in order to limit
>
the >
>> public review comments to only those that changed. >
> >
> Due to the huge number of formatting and text movement changes, we ended >
> up with almost all of the file red-lined. On the TC, we voted to >
> produce csprd02 and csd02 without this DIFF and start producing DIFF >
> files from version 03. >
> >
> I hope this is acceptable. >
> >
>> 3) We need a comment resolution log from the TC for comments received in >
>> csprd01 >
> >
> I actually wrote a script to append the resolution changelog as last >
> part of the file, but this was done after csd02/csprd02 were approved. >
> Do you think appending the log is an acceptable change to make >
> without re-doing the voting? >
> >
>> Thanks - if you can send me those files when they are ready, I'll update
>
the >
>> ticket and we will continue to process the spec. >
>> >
>> Thanks & best, >
>> >
>> /chet >
> >
> I'll work on this shortly - unless Rusty already started? >
> >
> >
>> >
>> >
>> -- >
>> >
>> /chet >
>>
----------------
>
>> Chet Ensign >
>> Director of Standards Development and TC Administration >
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----------------
> Chet Ensign
> Director of Standards Development and TC Administration
> OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society
> http://www.oasis-open.org >
> Primary: +1 973-996-2298
>
Mobile: +1 201-341-1393 >
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