Comments on oasis-0007-wss-username-token-profile-1.0-merged.pdf

[NISHIMURA Toshihiro <nishimura.toshi@jp.fujitsu.com>]

Hello,

Here are editorial comments on
oasis-0007-wss-username-token-profile-1.0-merged.pdf.


- Lines 275-289 are added but they are same senteces in
  Lines 253-268. (forgot to remove lines?)

- Line 82
  "Acronyms and Abbreviations" should be moved to section 2.3 (as is
  the case with SOAP Message Security document).

- Lines 66, 126
  Missing period (".").

- Line 169
  - Colon (":") would be period (".")
  - "This element" would be "<wsse:Password> element of wsse:PasswordText type".
    Or "This element" should be changed to "This type" and the
    sentence should be moved into the table for the description of
    wsse:PasswordText.
    (Refer to Blake's comment #5:
    http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/wss/200312/msg00049.html)

- Lines 163, 167, 174
  "Password" should be "wsse:Password" like "wsse:Nonce" at Line 177 (?)

- Lines 241, 243
  Do we have to capitalize "MAY NOT"?
  ("MAY NOT" is not a keyword in RFC 2119.)
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NISHIMURA Toshihiro (FAMILY Given)
nishimura.toshi@jp.fujitsu.com
XML/Web Services Technology Dept.,
STRATEGY AND TECHNOLOGY DIV., FUJITSU LIMITED