Re: revised-ebMS V1.01 Editorial changes

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Re: revised-ebMS V1.01 Editorial changes
Arvola,  Thanks for the quick feedback.  Comments inline.  Colleen  Arvola Chan wrote:  Colleen:  Here is some feedback on the V1.01 editorial changes:  - [ebMSREQ] may be an inappropriate reference. The document is not    among those that came out of the Vienna meeting and is probably out of    date and not easily accessible.  Any suggestions from the group regarding how we point to original requirements if this is no longer a valid document?
- Figure 7-1 is still not quite correct. The Header Container arrow should    point to the rectangle enclosing SOAP-ENV:Header, not to the one    enclosing SOAP-ENV:Envelope.   There seems to be some disagreement here.  The original change request from Dan Weinreb indicated the header container arrow should point to the MIME Part box, so that's how I revised it.  Maybe we need some further discussion on this one.  (Issue #69:  http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/ebxml-msg/200108/msg00162.html )
- There are minor problems in the signature example on page 60. The     backward slash towards the end of line 2279 should be a forward     slash instead. The namespace declaration for the dsig prefix on line     2282 is unnecessary.   I'll fix.
- The eb:version= 1.0  setting in the various examples should be updated     to eb:version= 1.1 .  Yes.
- Line 1743 should say  an ErrorList element with the highest severity    attribute set to Error  to be consistent with line 1748.   The intent is to say  that an ErrorList element should NEVER be present with a StatusRequest element, which makes its severity attribute setting immaterial, so I believe this is okay as it is unless we need to rework to add clarification.  See line 1750-1752.
- One bullet should be added after line 1756: * a StatusRequest element.
See above comment.
- Replace the schema definition with the attached XSD file content to    ensure that Appendix A and the separately available XSD file are    consistent. I have found one problem in the updated XSD I sent you    earlier: the ackRequested attribute was not declared with the right    data type. I have also updated the schema locations to point to     http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/ebxml-msg/schemas
Will do.
   Cheers,  Arvola