EMIX wd-03

Table 21, line 90 column 3 “in product list” is
not clear. Those with “yes” are in a list format, otherwise not. All
appear on the outside of the envelope. Not communicated clearly. If the 4
elements in the product list are together in some special format, then one row
of the table should be “product list” with the format defined
elsewhere maybe. And perhaps Tables 1 and 2 together with mandatory/optional as
a column.

 

David Holmberg

NIST Building and Fire Research Lab

301-975-6450