Monica J Martin wrote:
>
>> Najmi: This looks like a very good start.
>>
>> Please see suggestions below.
>> IMO, it is important to emphasize the role of ebXML Registry as the
>> "one registry for SOA and eBusiness". It is also important
>> to emphasize the "secure, Federated Information Management" as its
>> design center.
>>
>> ........"The OASIS ebXML Registry Technical Committee invites you to
>> learn more about the new ebXML Registry 3.0 and how it enables
>> Secure, Federated Information Management for SOA within and across
>> enterprises.
>>
>> ebXML Registry enables publishing, management, governance, discovery
>> and reuse of
>> electronic artifacts. These artifacts include SOA artifacts such as
>> WSDL, XML Schema,
>> BPEL descriptions, eBusiness artifacts such as ebXML Collaboration
>> Protocol Profiles,
>> ebXML Core Components, and any other application specific artifacts.
>
>
> mm1: Suggest if we are talking about eBusiness:
>
> Change from:
> "BPEL descriptions"
>
> Change to:
> "BPEL, ebBP and other process descriptions"
>
+1
Thanks for the suggested improvement Monica.
