> Najmi: This looks like a very good start.
>
> Please see suggestions below.
> IMO, it is important to emphasize the role of ebXML Registry as the
> "one registry for SOA and eBusiness". It is also important
> to emphasize the "secure, Federated Information Management" as its
> design center.
>
> ........"The OASIS ebXML Registry Technical Committee invites you to
> learn more about the new ebXML Registry 3.0 and how it enables
> Secure, Federated Information Management for SOA within and across
> enterprises.
>
> ebXML Registry enables publishing, management, governance, discovery
> and reuse of
> electronic artifacts. These artifacts include SOA artifacts such as
> WSDL, XML Schema,
> BPEL descriptions, eBusiness artifacts such as ebXML Collaboration
> Protocol Profiles,
> ebXML Core Components, and any other application specific artifacts.
mm1: Suggest if we are talking about eBusiness:
Change from:
"BPEL descriptions"
Change to:
"BPEL, ebBP and other process descriptions"
Thanks.
